Thursday, 31 May 2018

Egg girl

Egg girl


There was a big egg, There was a little girl, There was a lot of scary ravens, there
where skinny trees with big mountains around her.
There was little tussocks and big tussocks blowing back and forward in the westley.

The girl had a blue dress and bare feet with brown hair and blue eyes her dress has
little red and white lines and flowers.
the girl was carrying a big white oval egg in her
hands she looked very determined to get her egg home.
There was a big thunderstorm booming behind her.

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